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Verbal Warning
Verbal Warning: A Rave About Writing
Ideas for this blog come to me at the strangest times. For example, in the middle of the night last night, I had to get up to address a call of nature.
Scratch that. Last night, in the middle of the night, I fumbled my way out of the bedclothes, fell out of bed, and staggered toward the bathroom. And, no, I was not drunk. I’m just not very coordinated at two in the morning.
However, my creative side seems to function just fine because I actually considered what verb would best convey my progress toward that little room.
So, I’m a little weird about words; I believe we’ve covered that in previous posts.
Here’s my point: the right (or wrong) verb can make or break a sentence.
Admit it. After reading that first sentence, you probably were saying to yourself, “Oh, ho hum. Who cares if Kym had to get up in the middle of the night?” After the second, more active sentence, perhaps you were wondering, “Why was Kym stumbling? Was she sick? Drunk? Going to the aid of a sick child? Or was she merely very tired?”
So, when you write, think carefully about your verb choice and what that choice might convey. Don’t just say your character walked across the room, tell your readers how. Did your hero amble toward the heroine? (Shades of a dusty cowboy fresh from rounding up the horses.) Did your heroine scuttle across the street? (Finding her way to a hiding place to spy on her philandering husband.) Or, maybe she merely drifted into a room. (A “diamond of the first water” floating into a ball as all heads turn toward her.)
I actually have a list — culled from many other lists I’ve found here and there — of some of the many ways a person can move. Here are just a few: schlepp, tramp, lope, march, prowl, gambol, scoot, slouch. Perhaps you’d like to leave a comment with an example of when and how you might use them.
P.S. I’ve always wondered what the phrase “diamond of the first water” meant. So I looked it up. Here’s the origin, from the website, English for Students (http://www.english-for-students.com/The-First-Water.html).
Origin:
From the gem trade. The clarity of diamonds is assessed by their translucence; the more like water, the higher the quality. Thiscomparison of diamonds with water dates back to at least the early 17th century, and Shakespeare alludes to it in Tymon of Athens, 1607. The 1753 edition of Chambers’ Encyclopedia has this under an entry for ‘Diamond’:
“The first water in Diamonds means the greatest purity and perfection of their complexion, which ought to be that of the clearest drop of water. When Diamonds fall short of this perfection, they are said to be of the second or third water, &c. till the stonemay be properly called a coloured one.”
I Feel So Used!
A Rave About Reading
I’m a garage saler, a consignment and Goodwill shopper, an flea market lover and, on occasion — though I hate to admit it — a garbage picker. I like to own things with a bit of history, though not necessarily with someone else’s dirt.
Plus I’m cheap.
Thus, it’s probably no surprise that I like to read books about people with similar habits. Recently I read several in a row, all centering on items that were in their second or third life. (That’s a nice way of saying “used.”)
I thought I’d share some of my favorites.
Killer in Crinolines is the second in Duffy Brown’s “Consignment Shop Mystery” series featuring Reagan Summerside and her Aunt Kiki. In the previous book, Reagan sort of accidentally fell into the consignment shop business, as well as a murder case. With characters like Chantilly Parker and Waynetta Waverly, Pillsbury and Putter — these books are worth reading for the names alone! Add in a little southern drawl and a lot of humor, and you’ve got the perfect summer read.
Lethal Treasure is another cozy mystery, this one written by Jane K. Cleland and featuring antiques dealer and sleuth, Josie Prescott. Along with the local interior designer, Josie has taken to bidding on the contents of abandoned storage units. But when the designer turns up dead in a unit whose contents he just purchased, it’s up to Josie to help the police find his killer. Of course, she manages to do so with great savoir-faire, though not without a few adventures along the way.
On the non-fiction front, there’s Killer Stuff and Tons of Money:Seeking History and Hidden Gems in Flea-Market America. Author Maureen Stanton shares her experiences following antique dealer and flea-marketer-extraordinaire, Curtis Avery, through the ins and outs of the antique world. A must for anyone who enjoys “Antiques Roadshow.” 
Mary Kay Andrews’s Savannah Blues is the story of Weezie Foley, an antiques picker whom I think has a lot more class than those boys on the TV. A picker, for those of you who don’t know, combs garage and estate sales, flea markets, and yes, possibly even garbage picks to find items to sell to antiques dealers who reside higher on the food chain. Weezie’s got a boatload of problems that only start with her the death of her ex-husband’s fiancée. With Andrews’s trademark southern flavor and humor, this is another great book for the summer.
And I just wouldn’t feel right if I didn’t include Bidding for Love (UK title Flora’s Lot), the book that introduced me to one of my favorite authors, Katie Fforde. After reorganizing her life to join the family antique business, Flora is surprised and little miffed when her stiffly proper cousin Charles and his fiancée Annabel greet her efforts with a distinct lack of enthusiasm. Determined to prove herself, she sets out to find her place in the firm, eventually discovering that she may not only have found her place in the world but also a new love to go with it.
Whether you’re a second-hand shopper or not, perhaps you’ll find a brand-new favorite in one of these books.
Related articles
- Saying Goodbye to Favorite Finds (archaicchic.wordpress.com)
- Flea Market Discovery. (robertsongallery.wordpress.com)
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